tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885049791751167739.post1134681609317316062..comments2023-05-23T00:36:56.813-07:00Comments on The Peripatetic Poetess: On Loving Menwarmaidenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08391769344411207864noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885049791751167739.post-39697935863658938842008-07-22T08:07:00.000-07:002008-07-22T08:07:00.000-07:00Thanks, Drew! I was trying to work in some of greg...Thanks, Drew! I was trying to work in some of greg's suggestions to include some more contemporary references to draw in the modern reader, but I happen to agree with your take on it.warmaidenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08391769344411207864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885049791751167739.post-50691129967190375652008-07-22T02:45:00.000-07:002008-07-22T02:45:00.000-07:00wow. great start. I think this one works real good...wow. great start. I think this one works real good without punctuation...the flow sounds beautiful aloud. My suggestion would be to replace the newly mown grass bit...sounds too modern for Lilith's old-world style, you know? Otherwise, I'm liking it a lot.Drewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02406237930035674146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885049791751167739.post-40139089989843299132008-07-21T17:10:00.000-07:002008-07-21T17:10:00.000-07:00Still fighting with myself about punctuation. To u...Still fighting with myself about punctuation. To use it? Not to use it?warmaidenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08391769344411207864noreply@blogger.com